Two characters: Bob - Hobo & Jeff - Social Worker
A place: Manhattan
Two objects: Donkey, Hammer
Adjective: ugly
Abstraction: awesomeness
Looking past his window on 47th Street, Jeff saw the crowd make it's way to the tree lighting in Rockerfeller Center. It was December 21 and the Christmas Holiday season came. After getting off work, Jeff packed his briefcase, wore his heavy peacoat jacket, and took his leave. He climbed on the D train, and there was a hobo. He was extremely ugly and had a horrid and deadly odor. It was an old man covered in dirty brown and black drags carrying a bag full of clothes and shoes. Bob, the hobo looked his way. Jeff turned around suddenly, acting as if he was ashamed of looking in that direction. Not realizing who the hobo was, Jeff walked to the next cart, looking for a way out of the cart. Bob realized that Jeff had forgotten, he was oblivious. Bob began to follow Jeff's way home.
What happened here? Where is the introduction to the story?
ReplyDeletePlease post up the first paragraph that starts us in the middle of the action/conflict.