Monday, November 15, 2010

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Him:
He observed her, head to toe. She was laying on the bed, unconscious. As soon as he saw her, he knew it was destined. Her name was Mitsy Takako. She was from a small village outside of Tokyo. Still, she had no idea what was going on.

Her:
She felt someone watching her on the train. Mitsy finished grocery shopping and she was heading home. As the train came to a stop, he rushed to get out.
"Excuse me!" Sorry!" He politely pushed everyone.
"Sorry" She bowed her head and moved quickly before the train doors closed on him.
He looked at her in awe as he stepped out. He winked at her, as she turned away to escape his message.

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